React and Respond!
Each week you will given a unique picture to write about. We want to get your initial first reaction to the picture!
Objective - Entertain the reader! Have fun!
Hints
- Use humour
- Be dramatic
- Be serious
- Write from a different viewpoint e.g. It might be as Ronald Macdonald, one of the men in black, yourself or even a made up character outside the photo.....
This is a must do activity
As i hop in the sea i look dark down and see something in the distance. it looked as if it was a fat white faced shark? but surely not i can't be i looked closer and i was. the biggest shark in the world.
ReplyDeleteWhen i went on holiday with my family the one thing we do toggery is swim but the first day we got there it was to late so we just had dinner and went straight to be. That very next morning we went swimming very early and our parents didn't really care if we were split up. I dived in and swam as fast as i could still coming up for a breath i was very far in the sea now and i could fadlly see a dark shadow in the distance, i didn't think it would be a shark surely not. I went up and inch to see what it was. This big dark creature came closer i tried running but first i needed a selfe.
ReplyDeleteso one day i was in fiji when i saw a blue fish.
ReplyDeletei got my phone out and took a video.
later that day i wose looking at my pictures then i saw...
a giant man eating shark.
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After eating the best buffet ever, I find myself laying on a silky white towel looking out at the clear blue, glistening Fijian sea. Just when I realize nobody is even near the beauty of the sea. "Are they crazy." I scream on top of my burning hot lungs. A little tiny girl around the age of a four slaps me on my sun burnt cheek, which bursts me into the cold ocean and a sneaky shark is trying to explore me with his teeth.
ReplyDeleteas i was swimming at the lido people started screaming and hoping out of the pool
ReplyDeletei didn`t no why untill a shark jumped over me i nerleay pooed my togs it was the most scerest thing in the world but my couzin is way scarer
by noah AND bailey
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Deletedada dada dadadadadadadadadad DADA "Oh my man it is going to eat me"Says ronaldo "Go suarez the shark"says Lionel Messi "nom nom nom that was a good ronaldo.Now it is time for a desert called Higuian nom nom nom"Says Suarez.
ReplyDeleteBOOM "yay the shark is gone" everybody cheered
I was watching tv you now there is so very cool things on the news .On the news There was a woman swimming with sharks really swimming with sharks it was amazing the sharks were dancing too.(5 days latter) This is it I am going to be dancing with sharks thing is sooooo coooooool!!!! splash I am in the water Oh here comes a shark let dance Oh hey I am dancing let boggy oh hey wait a minuet why isn't the shark dancing Oh no it has it mouth right open it is going to eat me .( got to fly hope you liked my days and how the arm got chopped off bye.)
ReplyDeleteDun Dun Dun Dun aha a shark a shark I'm screaming my head off the last the I want is to be hunted down by a shark why couldn't it be a dolphin those are nice aren't they. So I start swimming as fast as my legs could take me. I made it up to the sore and I was perfect but I did have a few teeth marks and there but I was fine when I looked up I saw this man struggling the shark went for him I had no choice I had to save him swimming out again but this time I was ready soon I was right there one punch and the shark swam away we got back up to sore and everyone was safe from the horrible shark
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ReplyDeletewow it looks like a nice day for a picnic at the beach i packed all the stuff then i dip the side of my foot then my hole body then i run out of the water then layed myself on the hot sand lunch time i dig in and feed on everything and just had one more swim then a big creature come up behind me i swim all the way out and he just mist then i was safe the end
ReplyDeleteA Shark is coming after me,
ReplyDeleteI just can't really see.
I really don't want to have to flee!
Oh why oh why can it be?
All dark but shiny,
So big, so tiny.
Its loud, its whiny,
And its back is so spiny.
The great sharp teeth,
Just like a wreath.
Under the beneath,
Of the great dark sea.
i was in Fiji when i saw the biggest fish i have ever seen so i jumped in to have a closer look and it was a shark and i swam away and then i was lost in the middle of the ocean and then a big cause boat came and helped me and i hoped in the sauna
ReplyDeletei ws lucky to be a live
by xavier
A great white shark,
ReplyDeleteSo big but tiny.
If you get what I mean,
Because his backs all spiny.
The white not grey back,
Could give you some slack.
Though you don't want a nap,
On the very slack back.
I have never heard,
said by such a bird.
That sharks are nerds!
And who is that to be?
Why, King Sharker the Third
ALISHA
The one day I got to go swimming there was a shark in the water, but I decided to still go for a swim. When I got in the shark bit my leg and I thought to myself this is a good time for a selfie. I took the selfie and just as I was about to get out to show my mum the selfie the shark ate me and I died.
ReplyDeleteBy Alice and Megan
aaaahhhh the plane is falling were all goners say a voice aaaahhhh people scream i'm going to jump SPALSH I'm alive yah now lets see where i am look there's an island and i'v got it my ballon lets see i'm going to blow it the plane is flying again what well my ballon is done i'm on it POP!!!! what is that it's a shark let's take a very quick swim to the island THE END
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As I jumped in a lake
ReplyDeletethinking what a mistake
A great white shark
by the name of mark
tore my teeth out and shattered my clark.
His big white back
as big as a rat
It felt like a mat
like fur on a cat!
OH NO WATCH OUT
He's coming no doubt
I better take a selfie before I drought!
THE END
BY KAIA
I'm going diving,
ReplyDeletebetter start driving.
Jump in the water,
before it gets hotter.
Oh no here comes a shark!
What is his name?
I think it's Clarke.
Or is it mark? A
Anyway I need to get out of here
but my bathing suit has a tear!
CHOMP!!!
Ouch my arm ;-;
he must have a lucky charm.
"Yum said shark"
The End
This story tasks place in Australia & the sea.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Bob and people call me a baby but I just ignore those people my mum says they are the dummy's at school .My mum says I have all the brains in school and she is right I do.I have a bright red velvet jacket, dark brown hair ,bright lemon yellow pants and lavender purple shoes.
One day I heard some cool kids saying they swam with sharks and not one was heart.I said hay guys I have swam with sharks before too they all said well if you have bet it will not be scary for you then will it now .No I said it is so easy .OK tomorrow 5 o clock pm my house all right I will be there.
Hi I said hey hi let get started I will go in first and then you can show me want you got ok saying it in a quiet voice.Wait why are we at your house because I have a shark tank. ok that is just weird want did you just say nothing I said nothing thats want I thort .Your tern ok I hopped in oh no a shark is coming right at me got to swim aaaaaaaaa this is the end .
Thanks for reading by story of the day my arm came off.
I'm going free-diving in a lake
ReplyDeletethinking this ain't no mistake!
but I'm wrong this is a big mistake!
because there is a shark after me!
So I gotta swim faster!
Or I'll end up with no arm!
Or leg!
Or head!
Then the shark will be fed!
And I'll be dead!!!
but first before I'm eaten alive
gotta take a selfie while I dive!
by Josh.m
R.I.P jack farrow
1981-2015
I'm swimming all alone
ReplyDeleteI'm very far from home
I'm scared and worried
All because of Morrie
I see a fin
It's really thin
I swim as fast as I can
But run into Jackie Chan
It's getting closer and closer
Noooo! I forgot the toaster
"Goodbye cruel world'' He says
And then he sways
He waits to be dead there's no hope
Until he see's a pope
[Silence]
R.I.P. Lewis Mersaw 1979 - 2015
a guy named cody wanted dive so he took a breath a jumped in and said that the water is just fine so lots more jumped in and said this waters infested with sharks and more so they all swam out but cody stayed in they all tried to save him and he said nothing is infested but then sharks started sarounding him and the people said see ya you got into this mess now where out like the trout
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ReplyDeleteas I was swimming got bit by a shark swim away as fast as i can but i got eaten : (
ReplyDeletei'm swimming in the ocean
ReplyDeletei have to put on lotion
ahh that's better
wait, is that a letter?
it's in a bottle
time to get in the boat
and pull back on the throttle
OMG, this is just toat awesome
gotta show someone
but not a dumb one
but first, lemmie take a selfie
....
oh no, HELP ME
oops it was signed in as Aaron
Deletebut Poem was made by Alex . H
i was accidentally signed in as Aaron so...
DeletePoem By Alex. H
So my mum is always going on about going to the beach. So we on a cruise ship to Hawaii. While I was on the ship I broke about 50 rules.One of them were going into the staff toilets, plus they do not lock the bathroom so yeah. The big rule I broke was jumping over the side of the ship. I saw a huge shark and said "oh hi I am going to call you Fred." It was coming towards me and I thought it was going to bite my stomach off it ripped my pocket of steak."Bad Fred. Anyway selfie time." So I took a quick snap. Next minute "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" It ate me and that is what I am doing in it's tummy.
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By Alex R & Hayley
By mum by dad see you probably in 3 days. By sweetie. Yay i can actually get away from my parents for once. OK i am ready to go i have got all my scober diving gear when i get there i will just put it all on. I think i am meeting my friend there. Hi Brian should we go scober diving now. Ok but first i want to........ oh no he just pushed me in as a joke wait can i see a SHARK! swim for my life i told myself but it was to late. surprisingly i didn't get eaten by the shark i actually drowned. I hate you Brian you made me dye.
ReplyDeleteAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH said the poison in the sae then a shark coming to me!!! by Jordis
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Deletelet go fishing Sharke who catch the mos fins win and get all of the fish
ReplyDeleteI was going diving in the sea but what i see a shark it looks like a great white or a bull shark it swims closer as it gets closer i realize it was a great white i tried to swim away but it was already to late he ate me but not all of me i was lucky enough to stay alive to swim to shore. i went to the hospital and here i am writing this story i have one missing leg and arm. THE END by Jayden
ReplyDeleteI was going on a trip for National Surfing and it's my turn to surf I get on my surf board and start doing some tricks hard core and I fell off my surf board and I'm trying to surf up I can see this grey thing lurking about and I think it's a hammer head shark so I try to swim away as fast as I can but he Is still following my I start to slow down because I am loosing energy but It looks like I'm too late he bit me so straight away I get rushed to the hospital I wake up and see all my friends around me with presents and balloons saying get well soon I smile THE END by Jack P
ReplyDeleteIt was a wonderful day the sky's were blue and the sun was shining on the beach.I was just waiting for thins next wave when suddenly I felt a lite drift across the back of my skin.I spun around and..........There was a shark it was swimming away when...
ReplyDeleteOUCH!!!!! I stood on a pointy shell I started to bleed and then all of a sudden the shark spins around chases after me.... I make it to sure well whats left of me......... (1 hr later) I noticed I was swimming at the wrong end of the beach. The sign said...Beware sharks lurk in these waters enter at your own risk oh no
The sun was shining the and sky was aqua blue. It was a great day for a surf. As the next wave came crashing down it swooped me under. There was a big dark figure with white long teeth.I knew i was going to die ' HOW WILL THEY REMEMBER ME ' I know SELFIE. i took a quick photo then throw my phone towards shore Ahhhhhhhh ! TO BE CONTINUED...........
ReplyDeleteas I sore the sun communing up i said i might go out for a walk so i got ready then i sore a sine that said come and swimming with the sharks i said i will give it a tire it said that it was next Friday so i got good sleep for the hole week so it got to next Friday so i got in my swimming stuff i got in the water and i had to go down to the bootem of the see then the shark keeps chasing me
ReplyDeleteBy Lily
I made a friend in the holidays when I was going swimming. He has has a huge smile when he opens his mouth and shows his ivory teeth proudly. His big black round eyes stick out a lot. He loves the water and swims so fast that he's in a blur when I try to swim with him. Everyone seems to be afraid of him and i don't det why. Maybe it's because of his bluish colour. Or his fin, or tail, or his grin, or his sharp teeth, or because he's a shark. Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you, he is a shark.
ReplyDeleteI was reading the world record for the most dangerous selfey. His record was taking a selfey on the edge of the eval tower. But i had a great idea, on the bottom of the see. Today i went to the beach and dived down all the way and i finally touched the bottom, and quikly took my selfy and i saw in the backround a great white shark was ready to eat me so as hard as i can went to the surface and went onto sure and the shark had already gone. At least i got the most dangerous selfy.
ReplyDeleteTonight on one news we have two lots of breaking news . Let's start with breaking news number one. The first one is there is definitely breaking news. The second breaking news is there eyes a shark attack at coral reef. That was amazing to hear that because that is the first shark in coral reef since 1915 and that was 1000 years ago. Anyway let's get on with it before we run out of time. Over to you eddy (shark attack person.) how do you feel now after what happened to you? Well you see I was enjoying the sunny day then I hopped in the water because I could see my friend yelling out shark shark help help. So I went to save him and instead of him getting bitten I did and it took 2 hours to get to hospital there for I literally thought I was going to die but I'm still alive now and that is itsackly how it happened. Thank you for sharing your fabulous and bad story with us. Next up on one news Jhon Key wants to quit toon in for more after the break.
ReplyDeleteOLD MAC DONALD HAD A FARM EI EI O OLD MAC DONALD HAD A SHARK EI
ReplyDeleteEI O OLD MAC DONALD DIED BY HIS SHARK EI EI O
[RIP] OLD MAC DONALD
It was a nice day and i was on a holiday in folrida. So i thought i should go for a swim.So i went down to the beach and dived in the sparkling blue sea.. I saw a shark and though thats so cool im gonna take a selfie right the the shark yuanked my down,chewed up my leg, ripped out my bones and raped me in led so to the very day my message to you is dont try to take a selfie with a shark thats angry.
ReplyDeleteIm in the submarine with my mom BROOM BROOM, Get out the.. (GASP) DUN DUN DUUUUN, A SHARK, GET OUT THE SUBMARINE, AWWWWWWWWW.
ReplyDeleteRIP: kid that didn't get out of the submarine.
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