React and Respond!
Each week you will given a unique picture to write about. We want to get your initial first reaction to the picture!
Objective - Entertain the reader! Have fun!
Hints
- Use humour
- Be dramatic
- Be serious
- Write from a different viewpoint e.g. It might be as Ronald Macdonald, one of the men in black, yourself or even a made up character outside the photo.....
This is a must do activity
IM IN THE LEAD OF THE MOTOR BIKE DERBY!!!! Huh a fence???!!!! I think theres a gap.... (Motorbike throws him off and he soars) I WANT MY MOMMY AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI was racing my friend and my dad my mum ask if that was funny. I crash in it the fence and I needed to go to hospital and my dad was laughing at me
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Hello victor... AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I'm flying!!!! WhoohOUCH!!!!!
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ReplyDelete3 2 1 GOOOOO BOOOM WEEEEEEEEEEEEE I'm super man I'm flying WEEE [SPLAT!!] AAAAAUUUUUHHHH!! my face am I in paradise [DEAD] what about the bike DDUUNN DDDUUUNNN the bike is conking out!!!!!!! The End.
ReplyDeleteArhh i said as i was on my motorbike for the first time.
ReplyDeletei was going to jump but i crashed.
i broke my arm and i never did it again.
hello this is one news reporting about flying human on the wellington race track. A race bike just got crashed into the side of the race track.The man on the race bike has just been flug all the way over the fence.
ReplyDeleteBrmmmmmmmmm went the engine as the race horn sounded WHOOOOOSSSSHHHHH went the racers as I took of into the lead doin' flips and skids, dawn approached. My heart pounded as the next corner whizzed past my head: The good news, I turned just in time. The bad news the next corner went down hill and my breaks were broken and if that is not bad enoght I also saw a fence with explosives ringed around it if I Didn't make it I would slam into the fence of explosives... so I took a deep breath and turned slowly... only to realise that my handle bars were broken as well. WHAM!!!!!! ARRRRGGGGHHHH I AM FLYING!!!!! Huh why am I not land-OW!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteBRMMM BRIMM BRIMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Tyler Bron goes head first into the cage i think hes injured man he went flying for at least a minute thats got to be on the news next minute BREAKING NEWS TYLER BRON GOES FLYING HEAD FIRST INTO THE CAGE WENT THINK HES INJURED I DONT KNOW BUT HE WAS RUSHED TO THE HOSPITAL ASAP HE WONT BE RIDING HES BIKE FOR AGES.
ReplyDeleteBRRRRMMMMMM! BRRRMMMM! went the motorbikes for the 15th annual motorbike rally race. I've got my money on number 10 right now johnny because he's won since 2001 right until 2015 will he or will he not win this year. The funny thing is when he wins he never takes of his helmet to show his winning face so will do it this year. Ok here they go, on your marks get set go of he goes on the biggest jump ever he makes it what no his wheels came of he thought he was flying because he was dissy and then crash! oh oh he crashed into a wired fence and got nocked out so they toke of his helmet and. TO BE CONTINUED.......
ReplyDeleteBBBBRRRRMMMMMM!! BBBRRRRMMM!! BOOP THE MOTORBIKES SPED OFF LIKE CHEETAHS. THEY WERE AT THE FIRST CORNER IT WAS TIRED OFF ONE MOTORBIKE RAMMED INTO THE TIRES AND WAS SENT OVER THE TIRES. HE SAIS AM I FLYING THEN HE SEES THAT HE IS NOT FLYING BUT HE WAS SCREAMING THEN SPLAT {DEAD} THE END
ReplyDeleteI was at the race courses one day and a motorbike want zooming around the corner and went into the side of the track into the wall and broke his back
ReplyDeletehat happend was the I am a motorbike race and landed face first on the concrete oh dear so really not much to be said thank you very much... fine I landed face first DONE! i a little more detail please it was my second lap that tells you all you need to know 'ok'
ReplyDeleteBy Jasmine
'Mike is in the lead he looks at the butterfly and oooooohhhhh that was a nasty fall' a few people come up to him 'are you OK sir' 'yes I think iv broken a few bones but i should be fine' 'OK sir well call the CALL THE AMBULANCE' thank you sir' ' your welcome
ReplyDeleteby Emma.M
Carters writing
ReplyDeleteI am flying. I go and fly to the pizza place. I say yum i want some pizza. I am hungry but i have died. I will eat pizza some where far away.
Yay i won the race (dangles arms in the air) yay arhhhhhhhh (going over the barricade) im going home byeeeeeeeeee
ReplyDeleteOn your marks get set GO!!!! BRRRMMMMMM!!! BRMMMMMMM straight
ReplyDeleteaway on full gears
BRRMMMM around the corner
DDDOOOOOOOSSSSHHHH straight into the wall ''AAAHHHHH''
2 weeks later...
$$$$200,000,000 worth of broken bones.
yo mum
ReplyDeleteOne Sunday afternoon I decided to take my new motorbike for a spin. So I hauled it carefully out of the garage, dropping it on my foot and yelping with pain in the process. As I vaulted onto the motorbike I felt an uneasy feeling about this ride creeping through my brain but I pushed it away quickly. I was wrong there just happened to be a line of green cans in the way just when I wasn't looking.
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By May
HE flew across teh field
ReplyDeletebrrrrrrrrrrrrmmmmmmmm , that's the sound of edwards motor bike as he starts his engene his bike goe's bezerk and thows him across the arena and as he is flying through the air he fells like he is flying
ReplyDeletebrrrrrrrrrrrrmmmmmmmm , that's the sound of edwards motor bike as he starts his engene his bike goe's bezerk and thows him across the arena and as he is flying through the air he fells like he is flying
ReplyDeleteI ask my mum and dad if I could get a racing car or a drifting car but dad said to get a racing car because it is made in china and it impoter to nz and Australia I love it mum and dad thank so much for geting me this car for me and dad said if got a drifting car is well and I said to mum you can have a drift in it if you like to you do have to if you do but thank you mum and dad for geting me one by Jordis Robinson
ReplyDeleteOne day a man went for a moter bike ride to the mountons he went really fast and went flying really fast and face blanted the road and he got ran over bye a bus and a car the end
ReplyDeletebye hayley
"Rrrrrrrrrrm Rrrrrrrrrm" The motor bikes were about to start a race. "And there off Jeff in the lead but Kaleb is right behind him around one corner then the other about to go around the Big cornerkaleb is speeding in the lead. " You need to slow down on this corner but kaleb wants to be in the lead. BANG BOOM BONG " Kaleb is flying through the air TO BE CONTINUED....
ReplyDeleteI was at the starting line. Number 45 on my bike. Butterflies swirled my stomach. " Start your engines" the announced the bald commentator. Loud rumbles filled my ear drums, I thought they were going to burst. " On your marks, get set, GO! went the commentator again.I was in the front for about 4 laps but on the 5th I got over taken by Tia Wallace, we were coming to the last lap. excitement filled my body. I could hear my heart beating in my ears. I had an oil spill and Tia went out of control she crashed into the foam wall I stared at Tia going head over the handle bars and triple flipped right into my back yard. finished first place. After they handed me my trophies I sprinted over to my house, and there I saw Tia stunned. I walked over to congratulate her on the amazing triple flip she did, when I saw here face I realized that I had to do what was right. I gave here one of my two trophies I won.
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I was at the starting line. Number 45 on my bike. Butterflies swirled my stomach. " Start your engines" the announced the bald commentator. Loud rumbles filled my ear drums, I thought they were going to burst. " On your marks, get set, GO! went the commentator again.I was in the front for about 4 laps but on the 5th I got over taken by Tia Wallace, we were coming to the last lap. excitement filled my body. I could hear my heart beating in my ears. I had an oil spill and Tia went out of control she crashed into the foam wall I stared at Tia going head over the handle bars and triple flipped right into my back yard. finished first place. After they handed me my trophies I sprinted over to my house, and there I saw Tia stunned. I walked over to congratulate her on the amazing triple flip she did, when I saw here face I realized that I had to do what was right. I gave here one of my two trophies I won.
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I was at the starting line. Number 45 on my bike. Butterflies swirled my stomach. " Start your engines" the announced the bald commentator. Loud rumbles filled my ear drums, I thought they were going to burst. " On your marks, get set, GO! went the commentator again.I was in the front for about 4 laps but on the 5th I got over taken by Tia Wallace, we were coming to the last lap. excitement filled my body. I could hear my heart beating in my ears. I had an oil spill and Tia went out of control she crashed into the foam wall I stared at Tia going head over the handle bars and triple flipped right into my back yard. finished first place. After they handed me my trophies I sprinted over to my house, and there I saw Tia stunned. I walked over to congratulate her on the amazing triple flip she did, when I saw here face I realized that I had to do what was right. I gave here one of my two trophies I won.
ReplyDeleteI ask my mum and dad if I could get a drifting car or a racing car but there are more then 1,000 racing car's in the world and I don't no how much is a drifting car said dad and mum it is like 1,000 dollars in your bank said my sister Abigail and dad said to ask mum but mum said to go ask you dad and dad said yes you can go get a drifting car and I well get a racing car or you get a racing car and you can get a drifting car dad said to go ask mum if you wont to go for a drift in a drifting car.
ReplyDeleteNumber 1nz races round the corner on his motorbike he hits the side and he says i believe i can fly i believe i can touch the sky crak crak crak he brakes his bones and ends up in hospital.
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DeleteI was walking along and then saw these people driving bikes and this one guy flung off his bike and went flying over the fence thing. Everyone who was watching crouded around and did the same... I was like "uhhh. Wuuuut?" Then my friend Addison came and said to me "what are they doing..." I said "I dunno," and that's how people learned how to fly...
ReplyDeleteI believe i can fly. CRASH,BOOM,BANG. I thought to my self i have done THE STUPIDEST THING IN THE WORLD.
ReplyDeleteI believe I can Fly and touch the sky.
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ReplyDeleteoh no he's going to crash boom band crash he realizing that he has just done the most stuped thing in his life
ReplyDeleteoh no he's going to crash boom band crash he realizing that he has just done the most stuped thing in his life
ReplyDeleteoh no he's going to crash boom band crash he realizing that he has just done the most stuped thing in his life
ReplyDeleteBrumm as I rash through the past cars and I speed myself away I turned back and see what's happened, and.....BANG,CRASH,BOOM!!!! Um I spake to myself and I say " wow I'm never doing that ever again.
ReplyDeleteWriting By: Estah
do you want to fly? step1)make sure there is a tramalin,pillowboncecastel and a pool full of water step2) get a motercy step3)fined a feance step4)drive into the feace on moterbike step 5)let go of the handelbars wiel driving into the fence
ReplyDeleteI ask my mum and my dad if I could get a Drifting car or a Racing car but you can get the car you well like and I can get the Racing car and you can get the Drifting car dad and me said to me that you can get the Drifting car and you can get the racing car you are the best dad in the world. The next my dad got the 2 car's that we want the drifting car said dad but I said to him that you can get the drifting car you want mum to have 1 tone. The next week mum well not give the drifting car back. The end by Jordis Robinson
ReplyDeleteand he is race around the corner and round go round another corner wait oll off he go in to the tyres is he all right do you think.
ReplyDeleteHe is all right
by olivia
and he is race around the corner and round go round another corner wait oll off he go in to the tyres is he all right do you think.
ReplyDeleteHe is all right
by olivia
And he is racing around the corner he goes wait no he doesn't
ReplyDeleteoff he goes into the tyres. Is he all right? He is right.
by Olivia
Arrrrrrhhhhhh!!!!! I could hear Mr Bron's scream as he went flying over the handle bars. He sounded like a girl. This was his first time on a motorbike and he was coming second, about to over take Mr Carter. His bike was stuck in a wall of green tyres as he flew straight into Mrs Kenyon's paddling pool which hidden just over the fence.
ReplyDeleteI ask my mum or my dad if I could get a racing car or a drifting car but dad said to me you can came with me to the drifting car race in America that is the best place in the world I said to dad can we tell to my sister if she well came so I went to see my sister and she said yes she said to me and dad the end by jordis robinson
ReplyDeleteYay it's Christmas and I got a moterbike and all the gear to ride it! We are going to the track to my first lesson and I am soooooooo exited! I don't exactly know how to ride a moterbike but I'll learn I guess, so my moterbike number is number 46 ok are you ready lets go brrrrrrmmm brrrrrrmmm BOOM CRASH ahhhhhhh I crashed into a giant wall of tyres ouch! Maybe we should have got a professional to teach me not just my dad!
ReplyDeleteToday i was pretty bored so i look in the shed and look what i found!!! I found a moto bike i didnt know who's it was but i dont care. So i got all my gare on and went on the track. i was having so much fun. Suddleny i got out of control m handel bars truned ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!! i fall straghit of my bike and on to the grass thank godness my mum find me and took care of me. by kiana sayer
ReplyDeleteI ask my mum or my dad if i could get a drifting car or a racing car but dad said to me do you wont to go to the drifting racing at 5:30 in the night... the next day dad said to me you can came with me you can came with me to work.
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