React and Respond!
Each week you will given a unique picture to write about. We want to get your initial first reaction to the picture!
Objective - Entertain the reader! Have fun!
Hints
- Use humour
- Be dramatic
- Be serious
- Write from a different viewpoint e.g. It might be as Ronald Macdonald, one of the men in black, yourself or even a made up character outside the photo.....
This is a must do activity
wow look at that a man over there is caring a shark what if he gets bitten that would not be great as i run over there with a crowd can i carry the shark can i can i can i no he says crunch to be continued...
ReplyDeleteAND HIS NAME IS Shark Lifter (Filipi Pokij)
ReplyDeleteHe can Lift his Buddy Marty Houston Jnr
He can lift a Great White
He can lift the Eifel Tower
He can lift a Blue Whale
He can also lift a Quail
DO DO DO DOOOOOOO
CRUNCH
R.I.P
Filipi Pokij
1979-2015
Killed by lifting a shark
REST IN PEACE
wow look at that muskuler man carrying a shark
ReplyDeleteit sounded like it was gonna bark
the shark was grey and white
i cant belive the shark didnt bite
the man was sun burnt everywhere
thet where standing on the sand right here
he saved the shark from off the sand
he almost bit his hand
to be continued
from renee and paige
shark shark help help. im coming. arghhhh way do shark have to be so heavy who else is strong enough to lift a 300 kg shark well were is the sushi man chop chop
ReplyDeleteonce i saw a shark
ReplyDeleteso i gave a loud bark
it was so dark
I thought id be strong
so i gave a lift
not for long
the shark was very heavy
i called my friend betty
to show her my guns
by accident i called my sons
so i thought i should run
But it was too late
he took a pic of my shark bate
The End
To be Continued
From Alice and Leah
from Leah, Alex and Alice
DeleteIt was from Alice, Alex, Leah, and Megan
DeleteA report of a shark lost in the wild the zoo keepers there was no sign of any one at that hour as the shark has dispersed into the wild please stay inside for later report of the shark . Lock all doors and windows and don't leave your house at all as the news report team went down the road someone thought the caught a eye
ReplyDeleteon something as the following the path to the beach as seeing the sight it took the words out of my mouth i said get the camera 3 2 1 action as we where filming i tried to get the shark in as seeing a ,man carrying the shark it was settle he throw it into the water there was no more of the shark at all that it for the news .
DEAR DUMB DIARY...😆💪
ReplyDeleteThe wind gushed against my face as I saw a wonder before my eyes. Chilly Mcfreeze the famous wrestler was showing off his guns, AGAIN. It was a nice day at the beach but seriously, no one was listening. Wait... I just saw that tail flinch. You wouldn't believe what I saw. I looked in the sharks eyes and GUESS WHAT! It winked straight at me! I thought it was dead but with one mighty leap it flipped into the air and back in the sea. Waves crushed as the poor marine animal struggled to breathe. It tossed and turned with no intention of stopping. No one bothered to help so I started to dive towards the sea. Struggling, I finally managed to pull the shark to safety in the deeper part of the sea. It swam off in a hurry and I swore it smiled at me. Hey I guess we can show off all the time...
tonight on one news jaws has struck again at wooly wooly beach. There being reports of shark attacks. The wambulance has had to come and attend to the citizens. Here's some famous people had to say so John Cena what to you have to say i'm 21 hey Neymar JR what do you have to say his name was Jeff Aadesh what to you have to say Jacob Duker got 50 bro Duker. And lastly Jacob Duker Aadesh Aadesh Aadesh. Well they're you have it folks goodnight but you really should'nt go swimming at wooly wooly beach at night or day
ReplyDeleteBy Jack.C
Sam.B
And Joshua .B
The shark was grey and white, white
ReplyDeleteI'm surprised he didn't bite, bite
It gave me a little fright , fright
and made my collar tight, tight
My mussel's are so right ,right
Now I can't sleep at night , night
Hey, look what I got,
ReplyDeleteto get it, I had to go through a lot!
Man this is a good workout
gotta give it a shout
Imma get loads of money off this
luckily I didn't miss.
Everyone, look at this shark.
I caught it without even a little mark.
Actually, No
you did not so
I bought that from wall mart
from a man named Bart
fine you got me
we're both liars see
but it did cost 100 bucks
with it came some little ducks!
by Alex. H
Man the best workout yet,
ReplyDeleteI'll bet,
The lift is better than you think,
The shark's bladder was as big as a pint!!!!
By Nathaniel
"MUMMY, MUMMY IT'S A SHARK" Chante shrieked "AHHH, AHHH SHARK MAN GET THE SHARK" as the shark man got up his powerful strides makes holes in the sand. He made a big splash in "GOT THE SHARK" he yelled "WHAT ITS A BLOW UP". " That is why I called my mum, gosh adults these days."
ReplyDeleteBlood slowly spreads throughout the shore. A body builder fights through the waves lifting with him a shark pouring with blood. Everybody Ohs and arrs at the sight! But the sharks eyes open and his jaw widens, the body builder drops the shark to the ground with a Thad. Before a second passes the shark eats the body builder and everybody around the shark swims off with a grin.
ReplyDeleteI line up with a ticket that reads "Shark Man" I fell butterflys in my tummy as its my turn to resive my seat. the speakers RORR Saying "Welcome Shark Man" An a tall musley man walksout with a smirk i noties a tank with a grey bler. The mestyes man steps into the tanks and lifts up a shark. The crowed RORRs:s with excitement as the jaws open and the eyes shapen SNAP!!! To be counted
ReplyDeleteThe shark was grey and white, white
ReplyDeleteI'm surprised he didn't bite, bite
It gave me a little fright , fright
and made my collar tight, tight
My mussel's are so right ,right
Now I can't sleep at night , night
by Kaia and Akiva
As i line up with a tick in my hand waiting to see someone left a shark up I sore someone cut in front of me and I said a lot of people have pad money to come here so go to the back of the line the he said I can do what I want I am the person lifting the shark oo OK when I got in it was crazy when the man left up the shark he stopped and the shark bit him so he said will someone like to do this I put my hand up and he said yes so I was the big winner
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By Lily
Have you heard the song called (I work out! )Well I make the song up and this story is how I got the idea .
ReplyDeleteWell it all started when I heard a sound coming from the beach it was the sound of help ,help by a kid .I ran over to where the noise was coming from it has a little girl called Singroe she was face to face with the massive big great white shark.
The only thing I knew to do was save her .
I ran into the water. The water was as cold as ice .But I dived in and punched the shark right in the face.
yeah yeah that is right I did it I punched that great white shark right in the face.
One of the parents of the child came in to get there daughter and why everyone got on to shore I punched and I smacked the shark right in the face.
Well it past away for a few minutes so I picked him up and cared him to shore that why I got to write that song and be the best Musial man in the world .
so bye for now see you soon.
By Maggie
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ReplyDeleteDaddy look theirs a man lifting up a dead shark dad I wish I could do that do you yes I do darling lets go and 5 hours later
Deleteto be continued
It was just a normal day at the beach. I was sunbathing while others are playing around in the water. It was very noisy until...A man walked out of the water with a shark? Everyone went silent then someone pouted out that it was a blow up shark. the guy looked so embarrassed!
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ReplyDeleteThe water sparkled in the bright sunshine. I splashed my feet into the small waves sinking into the sandy beach. As I watched the water pushing back the laughing kids, a triangle shaped thing caught my attention. It neared closer and closer. Wait..."SHARK!" That single word echoed everywhere as every person, child to adult ran around the place, backing away from the sleek shark fin. And then, yes the shark, but hands, face, and everything else on a person. The mans face was contorted with pain and he flipped the shark away and that was the end. Yeah, nothing else happened, that definitely was the end.
ReplyDeletethe shark jumped out if the water and landed on this random person he was flat on the ground then he stared sanding up then he was standing straight and trow the shark on the ground and then smashed his head on the rock it tried to bight his hand off but he just pulled his hand away then he got so angry he trow him all the way back to sea
ReplyDeletethe end
lying in the sun
ReplyDeletegonna have some fun
im gonna eat a bun
and then ill be done
i really love this beach
I want to sing and make a speech
Its good it doesn't smell like bleach
im kicking bark
i pick up a shark
i want to yell hark
so i did
THE END
I'm gonna show my friends,
ReplyDeleteWho's the bravest man.
But wait, lets be real,
I can't even open a can.
Then ill have to be be smart,
and come up with a trick.
Ha! Already thought one,
I did that in a flick!
I'll jump into the water,
and blow up my buoyant shark.
I'll make people scream,
And cause chaos in the park.
Then in comes the hero,
And picks him up like a ball.
Wait what, This is strange,
This isn't light at all!
Why is the shark
Squirming, and Moving?
And also why is he
Dancing and grooving?
Oh no, now i get it,
this decides my fate.
Because all i am,
is a piece of shark bait.
By Aaron
Man I wish I could do som thing hey look its a shark got yah you scary softy hey I'm tuffer then you then prove It OK and you no what I'm gonna get I'm gonna get a shark and lift it up ok. I can't carry a shark or swim suit them ahhhhhh.ok I'll get that inflatable one and show it off oh wait a minute this is!quite heavy ah h hey and why is it regalingah oh I guess seals my fait
ReplyDeleteAs all of the strong muscly men line up for the shark lifting competition this guy cam running out of the water with a gigantic shark in his hands held above his head.Everyone cheered,clapped and screamed there heads off.The all of a sudden everyone went silent and a voice yelled over the speaker we have our winner!
ReplyDeleteAs the rays of the golden sun, hit the glistening aqua water, sudden sounds of screaming filled the air. The people of Laguna Beach in California, gasped as one man, stronger than most, lifted a 843 kg shark above his head. Still alive, the shark thrashed its body trying to escape from the man's grasp. People backed away. News reporters, helicopters and photographers swarmed in like bees to a honey-pot, to get a glimpse of this man, doing something quite extraordinary.
ReplyDeleteBy Georgia
One day I was walking down by the beach and I looked to my right and saw a speck In the disdt so I went a had a look and when I was getting closer a lot of scales were cameing at me and then I saw a man holding a sark up in the air and then it killed him the end by Thorne
ReplyDeleteAs I walk down shark bay, the feeling of sand surrounds my bare feet. I see a glimpse of a crowd so I start walking towards it. My eyes adjust to the crowd as I get closer and closer. I near over and see a man with huge muscles lifting a big fat shark!
ReplyDeleteThe giant shark had a big grey scaly body and pure white jagged teeth. The shark lay still in the giants arms. A horrid fishy smell flowed into my nostrils. Great, it's now dead and disgusting. I felt like I was going to throw up! My feet kicked up sand and water as I ran straight the opposite direction from the shark that has no life. I sprinted back home and dashed into my cosy bedroom and slumped my back on my pink bed trying to get the horrible image out of my head.
The End
By Rio.H
At 9:00 pm Brock Lesnar enter the ring with a great white shark. Brock hit the shark with a couple spears arfter that the shark hit a choke slam on Brock Lesnar. wait whats that Brock lesnar gonna hit the F 5 oh hes does hes pinning him 1 2 3 Brock Lesnar wins and get the wwe World Heavyweight champion belt. And good night everybody.
ReplyDeleteBy Ben and Jayden
As I was swimming to sore I felt something rather slimy rub of my legs I thought it was just some ragged old seaweed BUT AS I GOT A BIT CLOSER TO SORE I felt it again and at this point I knew it wasn't some little old bit of seaweed. Then something horrid happened the victim showed his face it was a SHARK and it bit my hand off by then I had it I pushed the shark as fast as I could to sore and lifted a 200 pound shark up and after that day I am known as THE KING OF SHARKS
ReplyDeleteit is not a real shark
ReplyDeleteas i was dancing on the beach and i saw peete lifting a shark so i went over and saw peete he was RIPED with musles the size of trucks and abs of steal it was best thing i have seen in my life then it ate me and then i was in sharks belly i was mad . by cooper and bailey
ReplyDeleteRight now I'm trying to body build BIG!! i might even beat Arnold Schwarzenegger at it.
ReplyDeleteI have been at this Jim for like 20 years now and all weights (ect) are getting boring.
And believe it or not they brought in a new weight lifting station and guess what it is, its a great white shark and the people that work at the Jim said it's two tons and every body else tried to carry it but they couldn't, even one of them broke there back. two days later
So today I'm having a go lifting the shark and i lifted it above my head and made world record. Basicly it was internet wide with in 5 seconds!!!!
WORLD RECORD!!!!!!!!!!
THE END.
Our Father
ReplyDeleteWho Lifts In Heaven
Gift us a shark,
and not a Salmon
For this day
we forgive who eat our friends
Great White
Maco...
Gaben
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Let the shark lifting championship Began! First contestant please with the weight at 30 kgs. Now the finals between Nathan and Thorne. Thorne lifting 60 kgs and Nathan lifting 60 kgs also and that is a tie breaker. next 75 kgs. The winner is Nathan also wining one million dollars and Thorne winning five thousand dollars
ReplyDeleteI was surfing a massive wave I went ardor and came back up holding a shark by morgan
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