React and Respond!
Each week you will given a unique picture to write about. We want to get your initial first reaction to the picture!
Objective - Entertain the reader! Have fun!
Hints
- Use humour
- Be dramatic
- Be serious
- Write from a different viewpoint e.g. It might be as Ronald Macdonald, one of the men in black, yourself or even a made up character outside the photo.....
This is a must do activity
"Toot Toot" was the sound that I heard as the train rattled past. Suddenly all the passenger jumped out in a panic and began to run away. I was confused at the sight. That was when I realised what was happening, there was a giant iceberg in front of the train and was leaving a humongous puddle on the tracks. Dun Dun Dun Duuuunnnn!
ReplyDelete"Toot toot" "ahhhhhhhh!" i'm standing on the tracks CRUSH!!!! The End.
ReplyDelete"AHHHHHHH what what? im not scared of being squished by a train!" "toot toot" what yes I am "AHHHHHHHH"............squish. The End
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ReplyDeleteFinally, I decided to look up from my book. What I saw was a confusing sight. Huge willow trees waved back and forth at me and the sun beamed at me brightly. " TOOT TOOT!" the train speeded past me. I chacked my watch. 9:00? It's SCHOOL TIME!!! Well, at least it's not the first time. Books are really addicting to you know!
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ReplyDeleteit's a windy day and i'm standing in line at a park right beside a mini train station suddenly i hear a "Toot toot" it's the ice cream van! nah just kidding it's the mini train :-) i give the train driver my little ticket and hop on the train. the veiw of the park is amazing ,theres the playground, and the station ,and the trees OMG!! ,there's a tree that look's exactly like alex! "i think i must be day dreaming" i said quietly . Then i saw other pasengers diving out of the mini train , i looked in front of the train and saw a tree lying on the tracks i screamed [ manly though B-) ] and then i dived out just in time but i broke my leg as well, and that's why i'm in hospital.
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ReplyDeletebeep beep watch out of the way aahhhhh excuse me looks like we will be here a while hes a terrible driver i thought to my self. o noooooooooooooooooooo but I will be late to school. we were there for hours and hours until finally we found a stop but it was on the other side of school so i ran and ran and ran but there was no youse so i took the bus.but today the bus was closed and then i saw a sign about a free train ride so i hopped then i saw the driver this might take a while ahhhhhhhhhhhh
ReplyDeleteIt was just a normal day the wind howling and the birds cheeping and singing there daily songs. Boom crash boom oh no I sad it is raining on I know a song that will tell the rain to go away (rain rain go away come again another day ) I shouted out . (5 min later oh yes it is gone, I can go to the park again .Wait I need to tell mum,mum can I go to the park yes molly you can you know you can because you are old enough to go by your self .
ReplyDeleteToo too I am at the park this is so cool I see a train go pass I think I brag some money.I love my life, I love the train .
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Deletebeep beep watch out said the train driver ,hurry up said mum other wise we will be late and won't catch the ride all a board said the train driver. Well of we went on the adventure who know we might even see some creatures on the way . rattle rattle went the train along the tracks there was a long way until the end . Wait a seconded why aren't we moving we were stuck in the middle of no where we started walking following the tracks finally we made it yay it over
ReplyDelete"Toot- toot coming though" said the driver as he came to pick up the other people
ReplyDeleteto go on the train. As they ride through the jungle. All of a sudden cok-co-dodle-do
the little girl woke up from her dream. She was about five years old. she had lovely
mum and dad. All they had was a small amount of stuff she had a lovely toy train.
she took lovely care of it. One day she wanted to bye tickets to go on a train ride
but of course she did not have money. So she sold her train but she had the loveliest ride ever.
Over the Rivers,
ReplyDeleteOver the Plains.
Over the Mountains,
Here come the Train.
Carrying Passengers,
Carrying mail.
Bringing their precious loads,
In without fail.
Thousands of Coal cars,
All rushing on.
Through day and darkness,
Dusk and dawn.
Over the Rivers,
Over the Plains.
Over the Mountains,
Here comes the Train.
A Trains Day - Poem
wow! Very cool
Deletel was walking thru town and out of the open came a train it was flying i ducked ahhhhhh! I was hang off the side of the train but the thing i was not sure about who what when or why i was here but something for sure it was a train trip. I don't know where we are going but it's time for a journey. The next morning i wake up and the train it's not there i'm in my ordinary bed in an ordinary room and i of course don't find myself in an ordinary bed in ordinary room it must be happening i am in the ghost train. How long am I going to stay what's going to happen TO ME!!!!!
ReplyDeleteahh! I'm late for the train taking me to high school! I dash straight out the door and wolf down my breakfast. I burst open the door and look out at the raleway outside my house in the middle of the forest. I peer out at the other side I see 2 yellow and 2 orange lights disappear around the corner NOOO! I see myself sitting in my room. Whew just a nightmare! wait a minute... ahh! I'm late for the train taking me to high school! I dash straight out the door and wolf down my breakfast. I burst open the door and look out at the raleway outside my house in the middle of the forest. I peer out at the other side I see 2 yellow and 2 orange lights disappear around the corner NOOO! This time its not a nightmare :(
ReplyDeletel was walking thru town and out of the open came a train it was flying i ducked ahhhhhh! I was hang off the side of the train but the thing i was not sure about who what when or why i was here but something for sure it was a train trip. I don't know where we are going but it's time for a journey. The next morning i wake up and the train it's not there i'm in my ordinary bed in an ordinary room and i of course don't find myself in an ordinary bed in ordinary room it must be happening i am in the ghost train. How long am I going to stay what's going to happen TO ME!!!!!
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l was walking thru town and out of the open came a train it was flying i ducked ahhhhhh! I was hang off the side of the train but the thing i was not sure about who what when or why i was here but something for sure it was a train trip. I don't know where we are going but it's time for a journey. The next morning i wake up and the train it's not there i'm in my ordinary bed in an ordinary room and i of course don't find myself in an ordinary bed in ordinary room it must be happening i am in the ghost train. How long am I going to stay what's going to happen TO ME!!!!!
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NO THORN U COPY NATHAN. NO.
DeleteNO U COPY MY STORY THORNE
Delete"This is the best train ride ever the passengers said". I want to do this forever! 5 minutes later "we're here" said the train driver. "no said the passengers we want to keep going". 'OK then' said the train driver we will go to new York. 5 days later 'we are here' said everyone can we keep going the passengers said. No sorry my weekly shift is over but if you want you can go and ask the next train driver. OK everyone said and they all asked the next train driver and he said sure hop on. TO BE CONTINUED
ReplyDelete"All aboard," said the conductor. Everybody had really old fashioned clothes. I thought I saw a cave woman, But it was a fat man dressed up as batman. Everybody saw the conductor and went deathly white. they all fell to the ground except for me, I was immune. everybody got up and the turned out to be ZOMBIES!!! They came at me, with slobber running done their chins(Some didn't even have chins!!!). They slowly limped through the corridor towards me and...
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By Noah and Nathaniel
Toot toot, went the train as is ratteld across the old rusty train tracks. Around the bend and across the pond. We suddently went into a dark foggy cave. "I've been on this train before but i don't remeber the cave part". " Hmm they proply trued to inprove the ride. It had been along time like 30 minutes this ride only take 10 minutes. I straight away new something was going on, I heard screams up ahead, we started to go really fast ahhhhh!.Next thing i heard in the back of my head was ,wake up son your going to be late for school. It was thankfuly just a dream. but iwas late for school.
ReplyDeleteHello I am a mouse and I live on not in use train tracks. I am literally about to die. CRASH!!!! The End
ReplyDelete"I can't see someones blocking my view" but wait the guy in the front was not staring. "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH" I tried closing my eyes but that didn't work, i was screaming and everyone was looking at me. ONE HOUR LATER
ReplyDeleteThen i found out that the train was driving on train tracks.
MASSUEW NO STOP COPY NATHAN. NO
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ReplyDeletetoot toot here comes the train down the tracks. I am waiting for the train a bucket station it is going raver fast if it is stopping. I really need to get on the train otherwise i'll be late for school then zoom! the train when past so fast that it blew me over. I was really upset untill my mum came past in the car so I hoped in THE END.
ReplyDelete"Honk Honk" Blurted the train I Oh-no I had been tie to the train tracks by Aaron, And here comes the train, wow just what I need. DUN DUN DUUUUUUNN "squish" The End
ReplyDeletel was walking thru town and out of the open came a train it was flying i ducked ahhhhhh! I was hang off the side of the train but the thing i was not sure about who what when or why i was here but something for sure it was a train trip. I don't know where we are going but it's time for a journey. The next morning i wake up and the train it's not there i'm in my ordinary bed in an ordinary room and i of course don't find myself in an ordinary bed in ordinary room it must be happening i am in the ghost train. How long am I going to stay what's going to happen TO ME!!!!!
ReplyDeleteTo be continued !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BY MATTHEW
Toot toot no no no no no I missed the train maybe there will be another train later.
ReplyDeleteHow long has it been I sould problay walk to school but as I walk out the Train come. The End
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ReplyDeletedo u think youll even get the snidges?
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DeleteIve done another one because this one was short
Deleteve done another one because this one was short
DeleteLa ll la la la la la la la I'm singing happily on the train then suddenly I here this giant noise like a motor and it was really windy and it stank that's when i realized the person next to me had done a giant fart!!!
ReplyDeletebrom, brom, brom, brom, toot, toot. This is so fun it must not end! Suddenly a loud voice came over the speaker. "The train will be coming to a stop in 5 minutes". "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO". The train came to a stop. "oh well, i can just replay the level"!
ReplyDeleteToot toot here comes the train bolting down the rail at 1000km per hour in a cloud of smoke in front of it then a big scheeech then i saw a model train on this massive rail.
ReplyDeleteShimmered across this big yellow train
ReplyDeleteCoal up my nose oh I think its sprained
Down the road a man carrying load
Down a yellow brick road.
Along came the train
Riders in pain
"CRASH"
I think theres something wrong with my brain
No more train!
By Kaia & Mia
nice to see a poem! Great work
Deletechug chug chug whats that noise oh no I missed train I ran after the train then bong I crashed into a long metal poll guess i'm not catching up to my train now . great there goes my $20 .
ReplyDeleteby georgia
naaa naaaa naaa naaa is the sound of a train that is about to crash with every soccer player in the world.
ReplyDelete"The train driver has jumped." says Sanches. "Dont worry i will save you"says ronaldo
he pulls a lever and nothing happen she runs over to Sances and cuddle
end of part 1
On Christmas eve, my cousins from Australia came to visit my family...
ReplyDeleteMe and my family decided to have lunch at the esplanade. When we got there we also decided to go for a little adventure on the train...
--Thomas
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DeleteSuddenly a gigantic train was falling from the sky. I knew what I had to do, I had to do this "AHHHHHHHH." About three or four weeks later I woke up and... " OMG I'm a tree. This can't be. All I remember is I was walking on my daily walk." I started screaming. Then I saw a person like hayley. I saw her jump out of a train.
ReplyDeleteI must be day dreaming. I closed my eyes wishing and wishing. After I opened them and I was a human again. But I was in the hospital, I was right beside hayley THE END
By Alex R