React and Respond!
Each week you will given a unique picture to write about. We want to get your initial first reaction to the picture!
Objective - Entertain the reader! Have fun!
Hints
- Use humour
- Be dramatic
- Be serious
- Write from a different viewpoint e.g. It might be as Ronald Macdonald, one of the men in black, yourself or even a made up character outside the photo.....
This is a must do activity
That feels better i can fly like a bird. And i like to see my dog friends i like to fly with my friends. Bu...........t i don't like cats because cats are a annoying. And they think they are better than me. I don't think they me or they won't like the fan either.
ReplyDeleteby matthew
i wanted some cold water but my owner didn't know i looked all over for something cold then i found a fan that was up on a high bench i climbed from chair to chair and finally got to the top and then found the on switch on might of switch it to high then started to bowed everything thing away i couldn't get the switched off oh on i will be stocked for every up here to be counted
ReplyDeleteWell it all started when it was a really hot day. The power was off because of me and
ReplyDeleteI was so bummed because the fan was on. wait no i see it moving again my yay my person put the fan back on all nice and cool!!!!!!!
that feels better the wind on my face i can run so fast I've got super speed this is so exiting I'm going to dog city where you find the best meaty bones. ill take my friends ripper,muddy and pip this is going to be so awesome 2 seconds later they where all in dog city with a nice cold fan in there snouts that feels better.
ReplyDeleteThat feels better with the fan blowing my dogs streaky long bright golden hair in all directions. My dog now a sleep dreaming that he is superman with his bright blinding arm put out and mumbling I believe I can fly I believe I can touch the sky.
ReplyDeleteTHE END
by shay
Bang the door closed (yay finally i can try do my bucket list) number 1 put on mums make-up, but since I'm a dog this is going to be very hard. I raised my paws in the air and as hard as possible i pulled open the cupboard i picked out the first thing i saw which was blush my hand was wobbling as i brushed it across my face it was everywhere i had to clean it up before mum got home. i found some soap and got buckets of water all over the ground it was over flowing so i just closed the door and went to my next one number 2 fan myself it was so lovely but you don't won't to know what happened when mum had to go to the bathroom to put on her make up.
ReplyDeleteThe end
I'm so hot,
ReplyDeletecan I go on the yacht.
"no" said Jo.
can I scratch my bum
with a hoe
"no way"
said Jose.
can I have my laser ray.
nope said the pope.
how can I cope?
there is no hope.
is that a fan?
no that's a rope.
can I at least
scope my soap.
Stuff you
I'm just going to mope. D:
Is that a fan?
oh yes it is.
and know I'm cold
why am I bold
why am I gold
Is that mould?
By Matt and yes I know it is weird
This is another series of Super Dachshunds and the case of the fan.
ReplyDeleteIt was a nice sunny afternoon in the backyard of the Dachshund residents, But suddenly Jacky heard the alarm but it wasn't the emergency alarm it was... The... Fan time alarm!!! They raced down to their secret hideout and turned on the fan. The reason why the had fan time was so they could get used to flying and they loved it so much
THE END
Whats that?
ReplyDeleteIs it a cat?
No maybe a rat?
Boy, isn't it
Its a fan that's what,
and its in my hut.
I've gotta big cut,
from that thing that's what.
The airs so nice,
though it breathes some ice.
or maybe its lice?
I don't know what type.
If I have to tell you again,
I'm gonna wrap your throat with a chain.
its a fan I say,
Don't I dare say it again.
Bit of mistake sorry.
ReplyDeleteding ding ding the bank got robed and everybody is to hot to fight him. its 40 degrees call caption dot the dog roof roof agh captain dot the dog is coming i need to run but it is so hard because of how hot it is i ca still try ring ring ring hello this is captain dot the dog here what can i help you with captain dot the dog the bank just got robed help I'm on my way were are you at the bank Doha sorry be there in a split second a split second latter trip your under arrest now time to go back to the fan ahh thats better.
ReplyDeleteby xavier
as i walk in the doggy door i fell extremely hot like a chilly and need a breeze i say. so i investigate around the house and see the fan. i try turning it on but then my owner did it for me.as i lay down my skin waves in the air ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
ReplyDeleteOne day my owners went away like they always do they don't came back
ReplyDeletetill mind night. My name is Stanley and I am going to tell you about my
my days and nights. Back in the day my owners left I had seen them
sitting on a thing called a couch I can seen that the enjoy it alot but I
have never tried it so I decided to have a try.It seems nice .but it
needed some thing I know I am just really really hot so Stanley tired
the fan on and sat right next to it aaaa that is better
Phew it is so hot today. I wonder if there is a fan anywhere did I tell you that I can sniff things out like a K9 oh wait I am a K9. Well my owners are out i'm going to go down to the basement. I am creeping down the stairs of the basement when the door slammed into the wall ah the fan is oh wait the fan just fell over. I got the fan out of the basement plugged into the wall my owners came home I felt great.
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Dog and I'm a dog. Most people always ask me what do I like to do and I will tell you. I like to stand in front of the fan and feel my floppy ears flow in the breeze. It's actually quite fun if you try it. I know the reason people ask me what I like to do, it's because since I've stood in front of the fan so much I have the floppiest dog ears in the world. So that is why they ask me what I like to do, meaning what do you do to get your ears so floppy.
ReplyDeleteIt's so hot,
ReplyDeleteI feel like a boiling pot!
I need something cold!
maybe some mould?
No that's not cold!
What about some ice?
nope just dice. :(
What about some cold water?
No that's hot! hot! HOT!!! water!
What about a fan?
Then I'll be the man!
Yas a fan! now i'm the man!
by Josh.M
I'm really hot hot hot
ReplyDeleteI burnt the lot lot lot
I just wanted a drink drink drink
but I feel into the sink sink
so I need something cold cold cold
oh look look look there is a book book book
It's just how too cook cook cook,
I need a fan fan fan give me a hand hand
THAT'S BETTER!
Its so boiling hot
ReplyDeleteI think i'm gonna rot!
I need some ice
to feel so nice
Or maybe a fan yeah that's the plan.
The wind in my face,it feels like a race
My hearts beating,not speeding
I think I need feeding!
That was really nice I got my ice
BUT THEY WERE DICED!!!!!!
By Kaia & Mia
Dunna Dunna Dunna Dunna fan dog zooming around town saving the city by blowing the bad guys to space and his special move heat ray fan that burns the bad guys. His worst enimey is death dog the fastest supervillan in the world. So fan dog was flying around town and he saw death dog then tryed to blow him away but he missed then he tried his specil move zapemadooo! Zing and broke is little air speed jordans no he was super then he blew him away and the was no shooting no zaping jaust a calm city.
ReplyDeleteIt was a really hot day and I was trying to cool off. But then crash every thing fell ot of the cupboard.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is cat and I'm a cat wait..... anyway back to my master plan my owner leaves, check she leaves out her make-up, check it's in my reach, check or is it POOF!!! ahhhhhhhhhhhh blush is every where including me. well that didn't go well might as well put on some more make-up hmm how about some eye-shadow i started smearing i shadow on my face wait I think it's called eye shadow for a reason. so i put some on my eye-lids even though it was already there and all over my face. i went rummaging through her make-up bag and found the awsomest red bar in the world! LIPSTICK!!!!! i put it round my lip line but if you havent realised dogs don't have lip lines wait! i'm a dog! anyway so i put lipstick on like a clown. Then I saw a thing called "FAKE EYE-LASHES." Wow this is awesome there is green, orange, rainbow and all the colours you could think of. I couldn't decide what colour so I put on all of them. To be honest they were a bit large. wow liquid eye-liner well i don't know what to do with this but i've always wanted bigger eye-brows so i coloured in my eye brows then i heard foot steps aw man i forgot i have to owners a man and a woman i'm so stupid. i locked the bedroom door just in time. ok i need a way to get this make-up off now if you havent realised dogs arent smart so i dont know how to get this make-up off then i saw a fan and decided the make-up would get cold of the wind and blow of me wich is why i'm in front of the fan.
ReplyDeleteTHE END.
By: alex.r & hayley.h
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ReplyDeleteWhat are you looking at i want my fan i have a show in a minute and i need my fan whats the matter heres your fan said a smooth voice and now get her out here now says the movie player and now thats better.
ReplyDeleteI need a iceblock `well the fan will have to do ohhohohoho its sooooooooooo hot i can hardly talk what should i do on this hot day i wish my owner could put me in a ice cold bath or splash me with an ice cold bucket of water by bailey and noah
ReplyDeleteone day i was walking down the street then i saw a massive bone in a old ladies house then i climbed up to the window and broke through the window and ran to it but then there was a fan it was pushing me back then i got to the fan and ternd it off and got the bone
ReplyDeleteoh oh oh it is so hot hot hot i need a fan so bad how about I go to the neighbour house and see if they have a fan so i went there and the dog said no we don't have a fan i can't believe how hot it is would you like to come with me yes yes yes i would love to lets go to my friends house she is a bird so we went there we said do you have a fan said the to dogs no i don't it is so hot would you want to join us to find a fan yes yes yes a would so lets go to the cats house maybe she has a fan so the the three of went off then they got there look look look there is the fan yay yay yay i can't believe we found the fan it fells so much better
ReplyDeleteBy Lily
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ReplyDeleteOh man it is so hot today I just got back from school athletics mum come on just let me chill come on please "Oh fine" said mum Ok "Get me a foot rest and a fan" "Fine" said mum ahhhh that's better. Wait let me have my sweat off of my face! TO BE CONTINUED
ReplyDeleteI stroll on to the black stage with bright lights shining at me. My head is held high and my tail is wagging as fast as billowing wind. I stand in the middle of the huge stage the spotlight of the show. My trusty fan gets put on stage and then I yell at the top of my lungs "This is my air trick!" I press the big green glowing button on my light blue fan. The air starts blowing all over my face and then I yell "TA-DA!" and everyone stares in amazement (Not there actually staring at him like there saying what the heck?). No one gives me applause so I say to my audience "Why aren't you applauding to me? I did the best thing in the world!". People start to leave silently. "No!No!No!" I just figured out that I have embarrassed myself. Again.
ReplyDeleteWow that was so tiring i have just been at a mission yeah a mission. It was sooooo tiring i wish i could just have a fan right in my face at the moment wait. SERVANT get me a fan NOW!!!! Coming coming. Here is a fan is there anything else i can do for you? Yes get out of my way and GO. That mean little dog could've at least said thank you. I heard that
ReplyDeleteOMG its 58 degrees outside i need a fane to cool me down from my dayly
ReplyDeletewalk. 5 hours later, i still cant find a fane in the house or any shops...
they were all sold out.
oh yeah i need more i wonder how many fans i could get with seven galoons of milk and a milking cow? 30 seconds later whaaaaaaaatttttt none thats no fare look I'm a dog and your a thing thing gives dog fan dog don't bite thing don't give dog fan dog bite fine how many do you want um 52 1 hour later breaking news the temprature is 142 degrees you would be lucky if you got 52 fans ohhh yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeeeeaaaaaah
ReplyDeleteby Jack.C
oh man it's it's hot
ReplyDeletei need a pot
that will help alot
i will fill it with water
oh no it's getting hotter!
time to go
can't be slow
yes a tap
i wanna nap!
now a pot
i need a lot
wait, is that a fan?
oh no, there's a man!
snag the fan
lag the man
got it
ow, a nit!
thank you fan
i'm being chased by a man!
By Alex. H