React and Respond!
Each week you will given a unique picture to write about. We want to get your initial first reaction to the picture!
Objective - Entertain the reader! Have fun!
Hints
- Use humour
- Be dramatic
- Be serious
- Write from a different viewpoint e.g. It might be as Ronald Macdonald, one of the men in black, yourself or even a made up character outside the photo.....
This is a must do activity
On you marks get set ..... GO!!!! I zoom as fast as possible across the dusty track . I rev the engine of my motor bike no way I'm in the lead the crowds going wild a quickly turn my head and face the audience for just one second and BOOM I crashed and I go sailing threw the air !AHHHHHHHHH!!!! and finally I landed with a thud and I staged over to my motor bike and jumped back on I turn the key and the engine roars but by the time I finish the race I was last everyone had left however the audience was still there cheering I sadly cross the finish line and then all of a sudden a shiny gold medal was rapped around my neck Wow I won I cant believe it.Later that night I couldn't sleep I had butterflies in my stomach I just couldn't believe I won the race well then again I really could because well I was the only one racing.
ReplyDeleteZoom Ia m going so fast this is it the day want want my weel is flat this is not go .
ReplyDeleteMother please give me the tier bumper .seee seee seee all good my tire is bumped let go and win this race .
Racers start you engines and go zoom yes this is it I am going to win wait my helmet is blocking my eyes I can't see .bump wait is that aaaaaaa I am flying .
Zoom i'm off like flash with nothing to worry me wait what's that in the corner of my eye my mother crash bang pow! aaaahhhh i'm super man i can fly weeeee!
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ZOOM ZOOM I went to the race and then I full off the bike and I hurt myself and. I had to go to the doctor and I got better and better!!!
ReplyDeleteZOOM ZOOM I went to the race and then I full off the bike and I hurt myself and. I had to go to the doctor and I got better and better!!!
ReplyDeleteAh finally we've got it I said to my assistant, the one and the only 20,000,000 kg bar of chocolate. I put it in my backpack and we started to ride away in the night. I started hearing sirens and said 'they must have security cameras at this place because they are already on the chase. I found a tight gap that I knew the police would never get through and I went to drive on through. My assistant was in front of me and he got through fine. Straight away I knew I would be fine because he is much fatter than me. So I went to drive on through and I kinda missed and went right through the tires and that was the end of me.
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Ah finally we've got it I said to my assistant, the one and the only 20,000,000 kg bar of chocolate. I put it in my backpack and we started to ride away in the night. I started hearing sirens and said 'they must have security cameras at this place because they are already on the chase. I found a tight gap that I knew the police would never get through and I went to drive on through. My assistant was in front of me and he got through fine. Straight away I knew I would be fine because he is much fatter than me. So I went to drive on through and I kinda missed and went right through the tires and that was the end of me.
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Ah finally we've got it I said to my assistant, the one and the only 20,000,000 kg bar of chocolate. I put it in my backpack and we started to ride away in the night. I started hearing sirens and said 'they must have security cameras at this place because they are already on the chase. I found a tight gap that I knew the police would never get through and I went to drive on through. My assistant was in front of me and he got through fine. Straight away I knew I would be fine because he is much fatter than me. So I went to drive on through and I kinda missed and went right through the tires and that was the end of me.
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By Alice
Ah finally we've got it I said to my assistant, the one and the only 20,000,000 kg bar of chocolate. I put it in my backpack and we started to ride away in the night. I started hearing sirens and said 'they must have security cameras at this place because they are already on the chase. I found a tight gap that I knew the police would never get through and I went to drive on through. My assistant was in front of me and he got through fine. Straight away I knew I would be fine because he is much fatter than me. So I went to drive on through and I kinda missed and went right through the tires and that was the end of me.
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By Alice
Ah finally we've got it I said to my assistant, the one and the only 20,000,000 kg bar of chocolate. I put it in my backpack and we started to ride away in the night. I started hearing sirens and said 'they must have security cameras at this place because they are already on the chase. I found a tight gap that I knew the police would never get through and I went to drive on through. My assistant was in front of me and he got through fine. Straight away I knew I would be fine because he is much fatter than me. So I went to drive on through and I kinda missed and went right through the tires and that was the end of me.
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Ah finally we've got it I said to my assistant, the one and the only 20,000,000 kg bar of chocolate. I put it in my backpack and we started to ride away in the night. I started hearing sirens and said 'they must have security cameras at this place because they are already on the chase. I found a tight gap that I knew the police would never get through and I went to drive on through. My assistant was in front of me and he got through fine. Straight away I knew I would be fine because he is much fatter than me. So I went to drive on through and I kinda missed and went right through the tires and that was the end of me.
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naaaaaa naaaaa naaaaaa i am racing in imola on a motor bike against the worlds best and we start in 3...2...1...beep and we start straight away there has been a crash on traguardo says a voice on my radio so watch out his car is on the track
ReplyDelete82 laps later ahhhhhh i crashed and now im flyingi never ever stopped the end
by luca
naaaaaa naaaaa naaaaaa i am racing in imola on a motor bike against the worlds best and we start in 3...2...1...beep and we start straight away there has been a crash on traguardo says a voice on my radio so watch out his car is on the track
ReplyDelete82 laps later ahhhhhh i crashed and now im flyingi never ever stopped the end
by luca
now im flying and i never ever stopped*
Deleteone day I was zooming down the road on my new bike doing epic jumps over the buildings and landing on the rubbish tracks and back flipping off. I whet down a alleyway and on to a secret race track with a light dragged me t words it and there were same cantos oh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I was flying and I was sing I believe fly.
ReplyDeleteI go to the start line GO I race of in the distance I go round a sharp curve I fail and go into the barrier and fly through the air i'm thinking in my head (Randomly) I am the first flying monkey. KASPLAT KAPOW BOOM (SOUND EFFECTS) ARGH (SCREAMS) ARGH SHATTER CRASH KABOOM SPLATTER. The End
ReplyDeleteTony Hitlock died in a fatal Motor cycle crash with... Red Lomp, Susan Isa ,Will Opera, Otto Kings, Marty Moevach, Ethan Isopa, Gidoen Dwakkle, Signe Kingsley, Summer Jones-Smith, Ollie M Sebastian (Don't know other part of last name OK), Isabel Yakpot, Seth Hafty, Leah Insert, Dinkle Rewman and Drew Podlink
All 1954-1975 to 2015
WATCH OUT, THERE IS A BUNCH OF TYRES
ReplyDeleteyea right, your just liers
THE'RE RIGHT THERE YOU BLIND FOOL
No there's not you tool
WERE GONNA CRASH
WELL BE DEAD IN A FLASH
oh look your right
I guess I do have bad sight
*CRASH*
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
oh man, another nightmare
probably cause of all that scary software
Wait, I'm not at home
and, I need a come
...
HOLLY MOLLY
I'm in a hospital
and it's not very tropical
SO THAT WASN'T A DREAM!
IM GOING TO SCREAM!!!
by Alex H
I go to the start line GO I race of in the distance I go round a sharp curve I fail and go into the barrier and fly through the air i'm thinking in my head (Randomly) I am the first flying monkey. KASPLAT KAPOW BOOM (SOUND EFFECTS) ARGH (SCREAMS) ARGH SHATTER CRASH KABOOM SPLATTER. The End
ReplyDeleteTony Hitlock died in a fatal Motor cycle crash with... Red Lomp, Susan Isa ,Will Opera, Otto Kings, Marty Moevach, Ethan Isopa, Gidoen Dwakkle, Signe Kingsley, Summer Jones-Smith, Ollie M Sebastian (Don't know other part of last name OK), Isabel Yakpot, Seth Hafty, Leah Insert, Dinkle Rewman and Drew Podlink
All 1954-1975 to 2015
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ReplyDeleteWATCH OUT, THERE IS A BUNCH OF TYRES
ReplyDeleteyea right, your just liers
THE'RE RIGHT THERE YOU BLIND FOOL
No there's not you tool
WERE GONNA CRASH
WELL BE DEAD IN A FLASH
oh look your right
I guess I do have bad sight
*CRASH*
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
oh man, another nightmare
probably cause of all that scary software
Wait, I'm not at home
and, I need a come
...
HOLLY MOLLY
I'm in a hospital
and it's not very tropical
SO THAT WASN'T A DREAM!
IM GOING TO SCREAM!!!
by Alex H
I go to the start line GO I race of in the distance I go round a sharp curve I fail and go into the barrier and fly through the air i'm thinking in my head (Randomly) I am the first flying monkey. KASPLAT KAPOW BOOM (SOUND EFFECTS) ARGH (SCREAMS) ARGH SHATTER CRASH KABOOM SPLATTER. The End
ReplyDeleteTony Hitlock died in a fatal Motor cycle crash with... Red Lomp, Susan Isa ,Will Opera, Otto Kings, Marty Moevach, Ethan Isopa, Gidoen Dwakkle, Signe Kingsley, Summer Jones-Smith, Ollie M Sebastian (Don't know other part of last name OK), Isabel Yakpot, Seth Hafty, Leah Insert, Dinkle Rewman and Drew Podlink
All 1954-1975 to 2015
magical pony flying through the its a magical pony for you and i bang he smashed his face on the cold wet concrete crack he smashes into the fence crack he breaks his back ahh the wambulance comes and handy manny hops out to fix the dead man.
ReplyDeleteyay hes fixed.
by suli and sam
LIVE NEWS REPORT:
ReplyDeleteA series of people have died in a fatal bike crash in the tour de France including:
Bobbly Booboo
Micheal Mooman
Ollie Oompa-loompa
Sammy Sauceface
Polly Plumpjuice
WAIT DID I JUST SAY POLLY PLUMPJUICE, NOOOOO, POLLY COME BAAAACK!
Willy Wallop
Zoe Zebraskin
Maniemsjaf Mamma (Pronounced my name is Jeff mamma)
we will all take half a second to remember thier deaths, done,
SEE YOU TOMORROW
Made by Aaron
magical pony flying through the its a magical pony for you and i bang he smashed his face on the cold wet concrete crack he smashes into the fence crack he breaks his back ahh the wambulance comes and handy manny hops out to fix the dead man.
ReplyDeleteyay hes fixed.
by suli and sam
magical pony flying through the its a magical pony for you and i bang he smashed his face on the cold wet concrete crack he smashes into the fence crack he breaks his back ahh the wambulance comes and handy manny hops out to fix the dead man.
ReplyDeleteyay hes fixed
LIVE NEWS REPORT:
ReplyDeleteA series of people have died in a fatal bike crash in the tour de France including:
Bobbly Booboo
Micheal Mooman
Ollie Oompa-loompa
Sammy Sauceface
Polly Plumpjuice
WAIT DID I JUST SAY POLLY PLUMPJUICE, NOOOOO, POLLY COME BAAAACK!
Willy Wallop
Zoe Zebraskin
Maniemsjaf Mamma (Pronounced my name is Jeff mamma)
we will all take half a second to remember thier deaths, done,
SEE YOU TOMORROW
Made by Aaron
Zoom zoom zoom I went off like a flash with nothing to worry about when I was going to a competition they nee did a someone to come up and they got me up I had to ride something and when I did it I went up in the ear
ReplyDeleteBy Lily
I today was meant to be supporting my brother but I was there mainly for the yummy food. So I was sitting in the cafe there then... I heard my brother get called up so I went to watch him do his tricks! I was so excited because I saw him practicing and it looked amazing but I wonder ho he will go now that it is the actual thing. boom smack bang! I heard a yell i hope he's ok. That was his dream of being a motor bike rider.
ReplyDeletemy brother entered a bike race not that he is good but he entered anyway so we went and watched him. there were green tires around the edge but he managed to fall right into them and his bike fall in the tires but he went flying a couple of meters high.
ReplyDeleteand thats why he is in a full body cast.
from renee
I was riding my bike one day and I had an idear. It was to fly because if birds can fly I can. First I needed speed got on my bike did it as fast as I could. Then I flapped my winnings. Now I am in mid air "I can believe I can fly ..... " crash boom and owwwwww. It did not turn out well so do not try it.
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ReplyDeletebroom!!! broom!!! broom!!! I start the engine up and say to my buddy Fred the motorbike lets get going. He doesn't respond so I just go. I go across paddocks and around houses but when I tried to curve my way into a narrow grass pathway to get myself into a race course Fred's wheels just went flying of and they exploded!!!!!!! I feel soooooo sorry for Fred I said to myself and Fred was actually really sad but he didn't show his face he just kept it down like he wasn't upset at all. We went to the motorbike shop and they said there was nothing we can do to fix Fred but then I had the greatest idea......................
ReplyDeleteBROOM! BROOM! roared all the motor bikes. THREE...TWO...ONE GO!!! DNNNNNNN went the motor bikes and the person be side me lost control and BOOM CRASH BANG!!! I fell right on top of him and could you believe it I was flying ''I can't believe I can fly'' BANG!!! i fell onto another bike...
ReplyDeleteFour ours later... I was in hospital with a a broken leg, coaler bone and my left arm
WHY DID I SIGN UP FOR THIS RACE!!!
"I can't believe I can fly! I can't believe I can touch the sky." "Oh mean... AHHHHHH
ReplyDeleteOh I a totally not scared." "Yes you are!" A voice shouted out from the crowd." This is the most embarrassing thing that has ever happened to me. When I get home all I am going to do is, go and lock my self in the kitchen. So the next day I went home with a broken leg.
THE END
BY ALEX, HAYLEY AND MEGAN
broom broom broom the motorbike was ready to get on the way ready go they were of first the daisy meadow 2nd was the houses on the street and last was the ending i turned it to full speed but from no were the car tripped me up I'm flying yay I'm flying but where is the car I was worried at first but I was saved from the other racer it was the last turn could they make it and be first who knows
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today i was having a race and i was coming last then i saw my mum and she was cheering then i got distracted and i crashed and that's how i got in the hospital
ReplyDeleteAs the race official shot the cap gun the racers started there engines and all you could see was dust for a couple of seconds and then the crowd went wild because one of the had crashed
ReplyDeleteI heard the engine raw as I scatter over to the starting line, my heart was pounding in both excitement and nervousness.The horn went hoot! and I shoot out of the start, by the way this is my first time, then I saw a very steep hill I was going so fast that when I came down the I came flying into the stack of tyres " geronimo
ReplyDeletei hate it when i'm coming last my hole family was there it was a bit embarrassing so i speed it up a bit it was going out of control and i went flying after the race my kids thought i was the hero because i was flying but unfornuntlly i had to go to hospital.
ReplyDeleteim at the back of the race
ReplyDeletei need to pick up the pace
and put everyone in there place
but im at the back of the race
so now im trying to win
i think im gonna spin
i hope theres no pins because i trying too win
so here i go
im gonna blow
up very high
i think im gonna die
but atleast i will fly.
BY Mia
cool poem Mia !
Deleteeeeerrrrr I pass the pit crew my hands waving wildly the trees swaying in the breeze and I feel fleas crawling up my leg I do the twist and my motor bike starts swaying side to side suddenly I fling up in the air like a bird and I think I might die
ReplyDeleteAs I look down by bike is not their to protect me I am left here flying rapidly smacking birds and moths dead. Dust catches my eye blinding it within seconds. Rain starts filling my mouth suffocating me.
ReplyDeleteTO BE CONTINUED...
NEWS RESPONSE :
ReplyDeleteMany famous Motor-bikers have been caught in this fatal bike crash. Kevin Kawonski is lucky to still be alive. He is facing big injury's and will not be competing for another 20 years or so. There was a risked skid near the tyre pit and suddenly he was forced to fall into it. 10 others were also part of this accident. No one knows if they are alive or not as the bodies/people were not found. If you can unravel this undiscovered mystery or you think there is an answer to this Please Phone - 0800 011 011 24/7.
Palmerston North Reporter, Chante.
WHAT THE HELL HOW AM I ON A MOTER BIKE AND HOW AM I DEAD WHAT?
ReplyDeleteThis was part of this script Andy remember?
ARR THE THING IS I DON'T KNOW HOW TO RIDE A BIKE LIKE THIS!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH BOOM he crashes into a pile of tyres and he dies the end!
I belive i can fly, spread your wings and touch the sky, all i wanted was some chicken wings.
ReplyDelete3 2 1 gooooo! Im in first place tight corner bang in the tyre wall i went strait over and landed on a rock and put my self in a coma for 3 weeks and when i woke up i had to learn how to walk again. 3 weeks later after learnig to walk again i got straigh back into it, and when i was riding i came across the same coner and and i went over the fence and landed on the darn rock and put myself in a coma for 3 weeks again
3 2 1 GOOOOO BOOOM WEEEEEEEEEEEEE i'm super man i'm flying WEEE [SPLAT!!] AAAAAUUUUUHHHH!! my face am I in peradice [DEAD] what about the bike DUN DDUUNN DDDUUUNNN!!!!!!! The End.
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