React and Respond!
Each week you will given a unique picture to write about. We want to get your initial first reaction to the picture!
Objective - Entertain the reader! Have fun!
Hints
- Use humour
- Be dramatic
- Be serious
- Write from a different viewpoint e.g. It might be as Ronald Macdonald, one of the men in black, yourself or even a made up character outside the photo.....
This is a must do activity
Every year a Dirt bike tournament is held at Windflower Park. The most famous memory in these games was the time Jordan Cooped attempted a 3 60 in the air but instead his wheels fall off.
ReplyDeleteas i watched the show from a distance i saw a wheel a little lose as the bike went in mid air it both feel off and that's why i don't like bikes the dirt splat everywhere even on me yucky! FROM RENEE
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ReplyDeletewere going on a trip on our no weeld moterbike flying through the sky little stupid guy. should of titan my wheels now im going to die 5 4 3 2 1 BOOOOOOM. The moral of this story is you should of gone to specsavers. BY COOPS AND JOSH B
ReplyDeletefor 10 days of my life i decide to give up time to race in the try out for racing stars . When the day came my heart pounding as i dragged the motorclye up to the start line as they said go i was of and in the lead as i was running up the hill the wheels came undown and flew in med air and lost the race
ReplyDeleteone day Levi Sherwood went to be the first human to do a triple back flip on a 2 wheel motorbike he had done 2 back flips and then on the third back flip his wheels had fallen off in mid air and when he landed he had broken hi left leg and right arm
ReplyDeleteAs i glided across the damp brown muddy dirt my huge BMX bike did a triple 360. I speeded across to the dazzling beautiful green grass and i skidded up onto the burning hot sun then suddenly my dark black wheels ruffled of. I screamed with joy because it was soooo fun. By Nadia
ReplyDeleteonce upon a time there was a motorbike rider he had done his last trick on the bike
ReplyDeleteand then boom click clack the bolts had came out and his wheel's came off
dun dun dun!
to be contuid
so when i went on holiday with my friends and family a heard from a furthered teller that i was going to die in 7 more days so i decided that i would do something crazy i did a flip on a moter bike the the wheels not scrode on probably but after i had done it i had to go to hospertil and saw that my big sister set be up so she could get me back for revenge
ReplyDeletep.s this was from Megan and Leah
Well you may have noticed I am in hospital right now and here is what happened...
ReplyDeleteIt was a perfectly sunny day so I thought I might go for a quick ride on my motor bike. It turns out my step mother hated me and unscrewed my wheels almost the whole way making them loose to come off easily. So like I was saying I was riding it and then suddenly my wheels flew of and i was no longer in the air I was splatered on the ground. And that is how I ended up in this exact hospital bed.
By Alice
Buenos trades amigo.
ReplyDeleteHola My good friend
cinco de mayo on teusday
and i hope i see you again
you you killed my wheels
you shoot them 3 times in back
in the night i still heeeeeeeeeeear them hissing
oh the manufacturer still dreses in black
i looked at every fiesta
for you i want to greet
mabye i'll sell you a chicken
with poison interlaced with the meat
You You look like the tire
mama she loved him the best
he was held hancho with the dirt
mama always said he was blessed
the village all gathered around him
they couldnt beliveee what they saw
i said it was you that killed him
and that i'd find you and upstand the law
The people of the village belived me
mama...she wanted revenge
i told her i would see that she was honured
i'll find you and put you to death
so now now that ive found you
on this such a joyous day
i'll tell you that i had killed him
but the thruth i will never have to say
Buenos tardes amigo
hola my good friend
cinco de mayos on teusday
and i hoped we'd see each other again
sing to buenos tardes amigo
by luca and suliman
BRRRMMMMM!!! Duuunn dunnn the start of the final motor race has just started. Around the corner and ''UP THIS HUGENESS RAMP''!!!! WEEEE!!!! ''uh oh'' ''my wheels no my wheels. My wheels fell off when i was in the air ''AHHHH'' PPUUUFF!!!
ReplyDeletesuddenly i landed on a soft matt.
the end.
As I came out of my house and cheek my letterbox I have got this invitation for a bike race so I started to practice bike racing it was not in till Monday 26 of April so I had a lot of time so every day after school I practice then the big race came I started to get nervous then they said go as I almost got to the finish line there was a big hill then my wheels fell off the end
ReplyDeleteBy Lily
Well kids I am going to tell you a story of a young boy this boy's story you need to listen too.you need to now and you need to listen now listen up this boys story is about what can happen if you don't listen.
ReplyDeleteWell it all started in 1987 the rodeo style when bikers ruled the earth and cow boys and cow girls suffered or so you though .
One day the bikers and cow boys and girls had a race to see who will rule then earth both teams had to pick the best biker and cow boy.The bikers chose a young boy called tom and the cow boys chose a guy called Gus . The called the race on the next day .
When tom got home his mother heard and said practice now or you will lose the boy refused to practice .
After dinner dad said pump your tiers up to or you tiers will burst and while you are on it make shore those tiers are Corsica so the will not fall off. But tom refused he did not listen to his mum or dad .
The day of the race the cow boy had practice on his horse the cow boy had practice all night.
races at your starting points on you marks get set go!!!!!
The were off tom in the lead.
right in front of him was a big jump is tom going to make it .
swoop he was up in the air wait what is that every one was looking at toms tiers came of oh no said tom as he fall to the ground. The abidance came as quick as the could.
But all you can say now was he should of listened to his mother and father or this would of not happened
The end
Parody of pimp my ride:
ReplyDeleteSo you wanna drive with wheels,
But they go off flying.
Just call us now,
and well glue em right.
GLUE EM RIIIIGHT!
Come on, come on
dem right
You gotta glue em right
By Aaron ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
If ya wanna be cool
ReplyDeleteBut lookin like a fool
Let us loosen dem wheels
And keep em safe from the eels
Ya gotta pimp yo wheels
Yea yea
Pimp dem out!!!
"Let's hear from our first customer, Mr Jones"!
"I ENDED UP WITH BROKEN BONES, BLACK EYES, AN...."
"Alright, let's go to our second customer, Mr. Anderson"!
"MY SON JACKSON ALMOST DIE"
"Okay that's great, so you heard it folks"!
"Pimp your wheels down here at And get FREE COKES"!
To the tune of the santa claus song called Santa is coming to town'
ReplyDeleteyou better watch out
you better not weigh (a tonne)
you better not go flying
off your bike today
johnny noxville is coming
to town ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).
You better wear a helmet
Safety first
if you don't then you're gonna be cursed
Johnny Noxville is coming
to own.
By Matt
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As i find myself riding down the dirt road me wells fly off in a rush as i grip the hand ells my whole bike is in peaese
ReplyDeleteAs i find myself riding down the dirt road me wells fly off in a rush as i grip the hand ells my whole bike is in peaese
ReplyDeleteAs i find myself riding down the dirt road me wells fly off in a rush as i grip the hand ells my whole bike is in peaese
ReplyDeleteaahhhhhh my wheels they have fallen off my monster truck bang crash boom ive fallen out squish the end
ReplyDeleteWhat are you going to do with no wheels
ReplyDeletebuy moue from tony tier servos
1.call
2.pic up
3.go to tony tier servos
4.pic your wheels that are right
5.know buy your wheels
the end
What to do When You lose You're Wheels In mid-air...
ReplyDelete1.Call
2.Wait
3. See what ghostbusters can do
4. Eat Some Cheese
5. They Conclude that u Are flying
6. Die while eating Potato
The End
Cause of Death
Motorcycle Wheel Loss
Victims
Fillino Fellapini
Dean Mortyulicosapetri
Shaun Jover
Awel Hun
Summer Inkletonbot
Elizabeth Pin-Kjinloft
John Seredompf
Ed SoySauceHot
Hayley Plertilop
Matt Feehan
Already Dead
Sean Quise
Jommy Pooplaa
Susan Hdinklepop
Walsh Jklopjinmi
As I zoom past my next opponent the motorbike I am on bounces up and down like a basketball. I soon realise that the wheels are lose. I start to freak out as I zoom up the big muddy hill that's when it hit me " My wheels are going to fall off " I said in my head. Ooh noo
ReplyDeleteI'M GONNA DO A JUMP ONLY GOT TWO WHEELS ON MY MOTORBIKE UH OH THE FELL OFF NOW I AM BEEPED OFF THIS IS BEEPING CRAZY WALKED INTO THIS SHOW LIKE WHAT UP I'VE GOT A MEAN BIKE NOW I'M I'M ANNOYED CAUSE I JUST STUFFED UP I DID A FAIL FLIP THEN I DID A FAIL BACKFLIP THEN I TRIED A TRIPLE BACKFLIP THE JUDGE SAID MAN YOU HELLA WONT MAN YOU HELLA WONT GOODWILL KEEP DOING JUMPS YEAHAHA I'M GONNA DO A JUMP ONLY GOT TWO WHEELS ON MY MOTORBIKE UH OH I FELL OFF NOW I'M REALLY BEEPED OFF THIS IS BEEPING CRAZY YEEEEAAAAH!
ReplyDelete"This is Emma Minshull here reporting live from the motorbike marathon in Palmerston North." "Ladies and Gentlemen Boys and Girls welcome the 1st motorbike marathon!" "Ok here comes the 1st biker his engine is revving and whoosh hes off up the ramp and over the ditch.Nailed it.Now for his competitor.He revs the engine the engine roars.and wosh he was off as well over the ditch and... OH NO his wheels have come off and Bam he dropped into the ditch better luck next time.And that is all for today fokes but see next next time by
ReplyDeleteit was a sunny day on my debut for metal mulisha.
ReplyDeleteas i hit my first ramp i hear something ratling on my bike i hit the end of the ramp and crack MY WHEELS.
I HIT THE GROUND CRACK
He hit the ground with a thud. The next day he was dead...
ReplyDeleteVroom. I was going for a jump and up I go.
ReplyDeleteUp in mid air high in the sky as the birds TWEET,
still in mid air as I come down my wheels come off?
As i come down with a thud.
and that is how I am in hospital!!!
Zoom!! as i went up the ramp i heard a massive rattling sound i looked down and saw that my wheels were not in tacked to the motorbike. I satrted to freak out realizing that i could fall to my death. As i was falling someone went up the other ramp and caught me in mid air we fixed the bike a i was not injured... By ben and jayden
ReplyDeletetoday i was doing the most risking s stunt in the world when im in the air i hath to take my weels off and that's why im in thes mess
ReplyDeletei was driving in my super cool new motorcycle that i got for 2 dollars i saw this massive jump and thought I'm gonna do this jump better than anyone but as i jumped int he air doing 360s all the way my motorcycle wheels came of when i landed boom crash smash crunch my bones where scattered now I'm in a hospital I'm lucky to be alive now i now why that motorcycle was 2 dollars By Mia Tahiwi
ReplyDeleteBreaking News - A man is seriously injured after his wheels falling of as he was on his motorbike. His comment was: "A good thing I have insurance!!!" Thank you for watching we'll see you tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteCluck clunk as I walk towards the stadium.321 GO!!! I hear from the loud speaker. Ohh its started already next up in mr goggles is up next. Pop bang crunch. Poor mr goggles.
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