React and Respond!
Each week you will given a unique picture to write about. We want to get your initial first reaction to the picture!
Objective - Entertain the reader! Have fun!
Hints
- Use humour
- Be dramatic
- Be serious
- Write from a different viewpoint e.g. It might be as Ronald Macdonald, one of the men in black, yourself or even a made up character outside the photo.....
This is a must do activity
yah i am at the animal park today and look at that amzaing and out of this world crocadial thats a show 5 minutes later aagghh i am in the beast aagghh help me now
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As you can probbley imagine i am in a crocks mouth and he is just about to close his jour and CRUNCH ARR HELP
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Today I am at Australia zoo and we are about to go see the crocodiles do tricks and stuff! Yay its starting. Any volunteers said the host. then a little girl put up her hand. you the host said looking at the little girl. So she jumped up and she got told to hold the fish up in the air for the crocodile. Then the host said let go when he jumps for it. She looked at the host to say ok but when she turned that when the crocodile jumped.
ReplyDeleteWhen me and my family were on holiday we went to Auckland zoo. It took like a hour to get to my favourite animal, crocodiles. when we finally got to the crockodiles i was so exited i was shacking i couldnt see a thing since it was surounded in people
ReplyDeleteso i asked my dad if i could sit on his shoulders and he said ''yes''. So now i can actully see them now. My dad tried to get a better grip and my dad let go and i fell in ''AAAHHHH''. ''OOOWWWHH'' i said as i hit the stoney ground really hard. The crockodile quickly ran out of the water and scoped me up with his tounge ''AAAAAAHHHHHH'' ''HHHHEEEELLLPPP!!!!!!!!'' so the zoo ceeper got a fish and the crockodil droped me and went for the fish and he threw the fish into the water and the crocodile went running after it. so i was safe, but crocodils are not my favourite animal any more. ( ͠° ͟ʖ ͡°)
Hey cool! i found a rock, ill just go inside this hole in the rock and then hold onto the crocodile teeth and ......... AHHHHHHHHHHHH! GOODBYE EVERYONE! ...... nothing. I DID'NT SAY NOTHING ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡ °) hehehehe
ReplyDeleteBy Aaron
As my family park into a horizontal parking lot for a dinosaur themed fun park I sigh confused mum said where going to a normal, ordinarily city park but instead I'm in the middle of nowhere parked in-front of some geeky fun park. But as I turn my head over to my brother I can tell what he is thinking "Alright let's play, mum and dad seriously know me." I think to myself how could he think this is cool oh yeah that's right he is a dinosaur freak. I speak up to confess my feelings "Mum, Dad you said where going around the corner from our house to the ordinary park not in the dinosaur century." I look at mum then dad and back at mum but in the corner of my eye I see a actual dinosaur eating a 4 year old!
ReplyDeleteas i took step into the family park my eyes turned bright as there was 65 animals to see the first stop was crocodile there was manger there talking about what they are after long and boring speech they said does anyone want to came into the habbit to feed them i took a pause it was my dream to do feed this large animal she said last chance i raised my arm slowly i was the only one who decide to do it but crocodile decide to take snap as he was doing that i was nearly eaten i was thinking what could i do what could i do
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There were tons of people standing by the crocodile so I went to join them as I got to the front of the group and there I saw a Girl in the crocodiles mouth. Then it dropped the girl and ate everyone else.
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Toni Khang
Red Phillips
Kyle Sringe
Sally Jones-Smith
Sindy Hell
Andrew Dralley
Peter Yu-Hue
1987-1993 To 2015
I fought with all my might,
ReplyDeleteI wanted to try and fight.
Before it is night,
Then I have to say goodbye.
I couldn't hear the crunch,
Nor the mighty munch,
All I could hear was my teeth going
crunch munch crunch!
Munch, Munch
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I don't want to be this croc's
Lunch, Lunch
i didn't even eat my
Brunch, Brunch
I might as well give it a
Punch, Punch
OH NO!
HE HAS,
LEAD, LEAD
Ded, Ded,
R.I.P IN PEPPORONI
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By Matt
Look mummy, a croc statue
ReplyDeleteCan I go and play
Yes dear
Until the end of the day
It looks so real
Are you sure
I'm sure it's fake
No need to shake
But Ma,
Might not
If it's not
Then it'll be a robot
Ok then
I will play
Good girl
Let's get an ice cream after okay
Uh mam not give you a shock
BUT THATS A REAL CROC!!
Haha shame
I tricked ya
Made you jump
HA
Come here dear
We're getting out of here
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By Alex. H
I was in the zoo when I caught a glimpse of someone use an crocodile as one of those lye down push up weight things I panicked for a minute and realized that he had it under control one two he counted thr I over heard a huge crunch he's dead someone called next minutes the crocodile go lose and that was the last thing they ever heard ever !!!!
ReplyDeleteAs my family decied to go to the zoo we all hap in the car when we got there my brother Monty wanted to see the monkeys so we did Monty thought that they were going crazy then we should go to the elephants so we did they spread water at us then i deside to go to the croudils so there i went the gat was open and i got crushed
ReplyDeleteby Lily
yay I'm at the zoo there animal that I didn't know existed like a zebra I mean who new they existed then I saw a fake crocodile so I hopped in his mouth and crunch I have now got a tooth in my back
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im going to the zoo zoo zoo
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at the zoo zoo zoo
i might poo poo poo
where going to the zoo zoo zoo
or we could do do do
go shoe shoe shoe
shopping shopping shopping
it will be whopping whopping whopping
were going shoping
the end by luca and suli
As I was going to the zoo I saw an alligator rush out of the zoo it was charging right at me then suddenly it ate me so I used my super strength to open the alligators mouth and jump out then a tiger came rushing out of the zoo
ReplyDeletePS the story was from Me and Megan
ReplyDeleteas we sat on a seat and watched the show a crocodile came out of no where a little got so excited she loved them and hugged it did not want a hug it wanted food and that's when it happened it grabbed her.
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Deletemummy can I get a photo with the chrocodile shore thing sweetie look i can hop in the chrocs mouth don't do that sweetie yes mummy .lets go now nnnnnnnnnooooooooooo
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ReplyDeleteI am going to the zoo.
ReplyDeleteWhat am I'm going to do?
Am I going to see the monkeys?
I know the big huge crocodiles.
Mum says not to fall in.
But i did
What am i going to do?
chop I am gone!!!
my little sister went to a show about a crocodile cause she loved them she was in the front row as the crocodile looked at her he looked hungry he gobbled half of her she was gone in seconds to be continued.
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As I was strolling through the zoo zoo, trying to get to you you.I shoved my mouth with lunch lunch cause I had no brunch brunch. As I got to the gate gate I think I was the bait bait now I really hate hate being the crocks bait bait .
ReplyDeleteBy Akiva,Mia and Kaia
I gasped. There it was, the chrocodile. Right at the corner of the park. "No, no, it had to be fake. Who puts a chrocodile in a park?" "But it looks so real! I can't go in there!" "It's a fake." "But...but... fine. Here I go..." SNAP.
ReplyDeletePlunging into darkness, a never ending hole, then finally... Pop! My head sticks out on the other end.
By Rio and Isabel
Mum can we play dentists? NO! PLEASE! Fine. I'm the dentist first though "NO I AM " fine ok I will start with the crocodile i will need get in his mouth and give his teeth inspections " NOOOOOO screamed mum but it was to late i was already in the mouth mum started to get out of the CRUNCH!!!! I was gone!
ReplyDeleteI was in a crocodiles mouth
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I did invite a friend
It really should have been you. 21 words
I really do regret doing this.
It was a really dumb idea
And the crocodile is so mean
Because my name is Maria. 24 words
I want to go home
Because I am alone
I want my little gnome
So I can eat Crocodile foam.
By Alice
hey hey you can you come check my teeth sure CRUNCH! did you just eat him yes i did eat him hey watch this hey you come check my teeth CRUNCH! did you just eat him to yes i did just eat him to watch this hey you guys come here CRUNCH! CRUNCH! CRUNCH! oh now that's too much now i think your right BBBBBBBRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF! to much people just to much people.
ReplyDeleteBy Jack.c
As I step into the park I can feel something is wrong.
ReplyDeleteBut I do not know what is wrong .
I can feel the tingling feeling when some things wrong you know.
Mum says it is just me being so exited, but no it does not feel like that.
I feel scared not scared like I am afraid of the dark.
I feel like something dangerous is coming my way.
Mum says I am go crazy but I don't think that's right.
I'm not crazy and I know I might be a little girl but this little girl has got good ability to know what danger is.
I might be four but I know for shore something is wrong.
So I looked around but nothing .
It took me an hour but it is four the best.
I sat done and had a think,what if I was wrong what if mum was right I thought.
Then I saw an alligator, Oh no I said this is not good.
I ran over and told all the kids to step away slowly .
suddenly I said save your self this is a visitations alligator.
I needed to save ever one so I said to the alligator eat me and leave every one else alone.
We agreed on the deal and I was gone
The end by Maggie
yay im at the zoo this is going to be fun "hey I bet you cant bet me in an arm reseal Kate" "yes I can I can reseal an alligator" " go ahead theirs one over there " so she took a deep breath and jumped into the cage and resealed the alligator " told you I could do It dave"!
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